Question

假定你是李華，因陪母親看病，不能參加明天下午關(guān)于美國(guó)文化的講座。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封電子郵件向老師Miss Clinton 請(qǐng)假。
內(nèi)容主要包括：
不能聽(tīng)講座， 向老師表示歉意；
向老師陳述缺席理由；
詢(xún)問(wèn)老師是否有講座錄音或影像，以便日后補(bǔ)聽(tīng)講座、
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100 左右
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Miss Clinton，
I am very sorry that___________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Miss Clinton,
I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.
My mother is ill, and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. I will take care of my mother until she is better, so I have to ask for several days’ leave. I am very interested in the topic of American culture. It is nearly a pity that I miss it. I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient.
Thank you very much. 
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件向老師Miss Clinton 請(qǐng)假，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：take care of 照料，ask for several days’ leave請(qǐng)幾天假.I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.這句話(huà)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， It is nearly a pity that I miss it. 這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)和虛擬語(yǔ)氣， If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient. 這句話(huà)用了省略句。