Question

假定你是某中學學生，以下漫畫描述的是你在某節(jié)課的所見所聞，請根據要求寫一篇英語短文在校園網英語專欄上發(fā)表你的看法。

內容要求：

1. 描述漫畫內容；

2. 描述三個以上學生在校的不良行為及影響；

3. 發(fā)表個人感想。

注意：

1. 短文標題與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；

2. 考生可適當發(fā)揮，使文章內容充實，連貫；

3. 詞數120左右；

4. 文中不能出現考生的具體信息。

Mind Your Behavior at School

Last Monday，Mr. Wang was giving us a lesson when Li Ming rushed into the classroom.

Answer 1

Mind Your Behavior at School

Last Monday, Mr. Wang was giving us a lesson when Li Ming rushed into the classroom. At that sight, Mr. Wang stopped his lesson, saying angrily, “Li Ming, you are late again. ” We students felt disturbed. Actually, such cases have been increasing at school over time.

Commonly, some students behave badly. Some often go to school late or stay absent from school, which quite annoys teachers. Besides, some others are talking loudly, sleeping or eating food in class. They eventually do poorly in their study. Worse still, some students disrespect their teachers, not greeting and listening to their advice.

Personally, such bad behavior should be forbidden at school, for students are expected to work hard at their lessons and show respect for teachers and their work. So it is necessary for students to promote their sense of responsibility and value. (126 words)

【解析】這是一篇漫畫寫作。主要圍繞漫畫內容，介紹在校學生不良行為，談談自己的感想。寫作時注意要緊扣漫畫內容，以及正確界定學生不良行為。本文采用經典的三段式寫作法。文章第一段第二句Mr. Wang stopped his lesson, saying angrily, “Li Ming, you are late again. ”使用了非謂語動詞作伴隨狀語；第一段最后一句such cases have been increasing at school over time.使用了完成進行時表示一直在….；第二段第二句Some often go to school late or stay absent from school, which quite annoys teachers，使用了which領導的非限制性定語從句；第二段最后一句some students disrespect their teachers, not greeting and listening to their advice.使用了非謂語動詞作伴隨狀語；本文使用了許多好短語，如：At that sight一看見，absent from缺席，Worse still 還有糟糕的事，be expected to期待，it is necessary…to…是必要的；本文在詞語運用上最大特點是副詞的運用，第一段Actually事實上，第二段Commonly很普遍，第三段Personally個人而言，這些副詞的使用使得文章提高了檔次，增加了可讀性�？偨Y：副詞運用得當會給文章增色不少，考生在寫作時應多借鑒此方法。

考點：考查漫畫寫作