Question

14．假定你是李華，你校附近一個外資工廠夜晚發(fā)出的噪音影響了你校學生．請你寫一封信給工廠老板Mr．Albert反映這一問題．書信的內(nèi)容要點如下：
1．寫信目的；
2．噪音對你的影響；
3．你的建議 （如：更換設(shè)備）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好．
Dear Mr．Albert，
I am Li Hua，a student from the high school near your factory．
I'm writing to let you know about the noises from your factory．Every night，the factory makes such loud noises that all the students in my school are seriously disturbed．I find it hard to fall asleep during the night，and then I can hardly focus my attention on my study during the daytime．I always feel sleepy in classes and that's just because the noises make it impossible for me to have a good sleep at night．
I wish you could think of some ways to solve this problem．Would you please consider improving or changing the equipment in your factory？
Looking forward to your reply．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是寫給工廠老板Mr．Albert一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一寫信目的；二噪音的影響；三建議；四期盼答復．
高分句型：
1．I find it hard to fall asleep during the night，and then I can hardly focus my attention on my study during the daytime．句子里it是形式賓語，代指動詞不定式to fall asleep during the night； focus my attention on 表示"集中注意力在某事上"．
我發(fā)現(xiàn)夜晚很難入睡，這樣白天我?guī)缀醪荒芗�中精力學習．
2．I always feel sleepy in classes and that's just because the noises make it impossible for me to have a good sleep at night．句子里 because 引導表語從句；表語從句中it是形式賓語，代指動詞不定式to have a good sleep at night．
我上課的時候總是很困倦，那時因為噪音讓我晚上很難睡好．

解答 A Possible Version：
Dear Mr．Albert，
I am Li Hua，a student from the high school near your factory．
    I'm writing to let you know about the noises from your factory．（寫信目的）Every night，the factory makes such loud noises that all the students in my school are seriously disturbed．I find it hard to fall asleep during the night，and then I can hardly focus my attention on my study during the daytime．【高分句型一】I always feel sleepy in classes and that's just because the noises make it impossible for me to have a good sleep at night．【高分句型二】（噪音的影響）
    I wish you could think of some ways to solve this problem．Would you please consider improving or changing the equipment in your factory？（建議）
    Looking forward to your reply．（期盼答復）
Sincerely yours，
 Li Hua

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