Question

Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.
It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.
I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.

Answer 1

小題1:It’s后加a
小題2:all改為both或去掉all
小題3:but 改為and
小題4:easy-going后加and或get改為getting
小題5:which 改為that
小題6:help 改為helps
小題7:in改為to
小題8:mine改為my
小題9:happy改為happily
小題10:dream改為dreams

試題分析：
小題1:這里抽象名詞表示具體的引起人們某種情緒、情感的事，前面用不定冠詞，所以It’s后加a。
小題2:all表示三者或三者以上；both表示兩者。
小題3:這里表示并列關(guān)系，所以but 改為and。
小題4:句意：我很隨和并且和我的同學(xué)相處得很好。所以easy-going后加and或get改為getting。
小題5:這里含有強(qiáng)調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu)，所以which 改為that。
小題6:根據(jù)helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships,可知help 改為helps。
小題7:be admitted to是固定用法，意思是被錄取。
小題8:我的同學(xué)，所以mine改為my。
小題9:用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，所以happy改為happily。
小題10:我有許多夢(mèng)想，所以dream改為dreams。