8.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文,介紹你所崇拜的一位偶像.主要包括以下內(nèi)容:
1.偶像的身份、外貌及性格特征;
2.你崇拜的理由;
3.對(duì)你的積極影響.
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.提示詞:偶像 idol
Of all the people I know,I admire my father most.He is short and plain-looking.His dark skin and strong body are results of hard labor.As a farmer,he is a man with many skills,making him known as"Capable man"in our neighborhood.(高分句型一)My father is kind and helpful,so our neighbors often turn to him for help whenever they have trouble.
It is my father's capability and personality that makes him my idol.(高分句型二)Because to me,an idol is not someone who looks great and achieves huge success but someone whose example Ican follow.(高分句型三)My father is always inspiring me to move forward steadily and happily..

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文,介紹你所崇拜的一位偶像.寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):偶像的身份、外貌及性格特征;你崇拜的理由;對(duì)你的積極影響. 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):turn to sb for help向某人求助;have trouble有麻煩;move forward steadily and happily幸福而穩(wěn)步前進(jìn);
As a farmer,he is a man with many skills,making him known as"Capable man"in our neighborhood.(高分句型一)
It is my father's capability and personality that makes him my idol.(高分句型二)
Because to me,an idol is not someone who looks great and achieves huge success but someone whose example I can follow.(高分句型三)

解答 Of all the people I know,I admire my father most.He is short and plain-looking.His dark skin and strong body are results of hard labor.As a farmer,he is a man with many skills,making him known as"Capable man"in our neighborhood.(高分句型一)My father is kind and helpful,so our neighbors often turn to him for help whenever they have trouble.
      It is my father's capability and personality that makes him my idol.(高分句型二)Because to me,an idol is not someone who looks great and achieves huge success but someone whose example I can follow.(高分句型三)My father is always inspiring me to move forward steadily and happily.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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