Question

假如你是李華，下星期六是你的生日，你準(zhǔn)備在家開一個生日晚會，并邀請部分同學(xué)和外國朋友參加，晚會7：30開始。你家住在民族街（Minzu Street）656號，乘23路或40路公共汽車在一中站下車。你家就在車站的對面。房子是紅色的。門是白色的，很容易找到。請根據(jù)所給信息，給你的好友Jack寫一封邀請信。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
656 Minzu Street 
November 2, 2013
Dear Jack, 
Next Saturday will be my birthday. ___________________________________________________________
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Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

656 Minzu Street 
November 2, 2013
Dear Jack,
Next Saturday will be my birthday. I’m going to hold a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 7:30. Some classmates as well as some foreign friends are also invited. The activities include singing, dancing and sharing interesting experiences. Surely, we’ll have a good time. I would feel honored if you could come.
I live at 656 Minzu Street. You can take Buses No 23 or No 40 and get off at the stop of  No.One High School. Just on the opposite of the stop is my house which is red with a white door. I’m sure you can’t miss it.
I do hope you will come.
Best wishes.
Yours, 
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本題為材料作文，根據(jù)高考的評分要求，從兩個方面分析題目。一是內(nèi)容：題目中圍繞生日派對展開，涉及到了派對的時間，地點(diǎn)，交通方式及建筑有什么特點(diǎn)，方便來訪者能夠找到等內(nèi)容，所以在審題時要把內(nèi)容審全。二是語言方面。要有好的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，起到畫龍點(diǎn)晴的作用。例如，固定結(jié)構(gòu)，倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文內(nèi)容齊全，且安排合適，文意緊湊，同時也做到了言簡意駭。
考點(diǎn): 考查學(xué)生語言的綜合運(yùn)用能力