Question

假如你是深圳大運(yùn)會(huì)(the 26^th Universiade)志愿者李華，您的英國(guó)朋友Bob即將來(lái)深圳旅游，應(yīng)他的要求，請(qǐng)您寫(xiě)一封e-mail，介紹深圳灣體育中心(Shenzhen Bay Sports Center)——“春繭”(the Spring Cocoon)。

 

 

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

位置	深圳市南山中心區(qū)東北角，毗鄰香港
開(kāi)工---竣工時(shí)間	2008年10月---2010年底
結(jié)構(gòu)：	建筑面積約32.6萬(wàn)平方米。包括體育場(chǎng)、體育館、游泳館(natatorium)和星級(jí)酒店
用途	第26屆大運(yùn)會(huì)開(kāi)幕式和足球賽、乒乓球賽、游泳等比賽和訓(xùn)練。大運(yùn)會(huì)后免費(fèi)向市民開(kāi)放。
特點(diǎn)	深圳的新地標(biāo)(landmark)，代表了深圳市的城市形象
“春繭”的寓意	優(yōu)秀青年運(yùn)動(dòng)員沖向世界“破繭而出”

[寫(xiě)作要求]

1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

3. 注意：信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

 

Dear Bob,

I was so glad to hear that you are coming to Shenzhen for a travel.    _______________________________________________________________________________

SincerelyYours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Dear Bob,

I was so glad to hear that you are coming to Shenzhen for a travel.

Shenzhen Bay Sports Center, nicknamed as the “Spring Cocoon” because of its shape of a cocoon, is located at the northeast corner of the center of Nanshan District, Shenzhen and next to Hong Kong. Covering an area of 326,000 square metres, it includes a stadium, a gym, a natatorium and some star hotels. Its construction work started in October 2008 and came to an end at the end of 2010. It was in the Spring Cocoon that the opening ceremony of 26^th Universiade was held as well as the training and competitions for football , pingpong ball, swimming and so on and after the Universiade it will be open to the public. As a new landmark representing the image of Shenzhen City, it means that excellent young athletes rush out of the cocoon and into the world.

SincerelyYours,

Li Hua

【解析】【寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥】

1.這是一篇介紹深圳灣體育中心是一篇典型的說(shuō)明文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，其它時(shí)態(tài)為輔；

2.在表達(dá)時(shí)注意專(zhuān)有名詞的大寫(xiě)、時(shí)間、位置、面積的表達(dá)，不要混淆體育場(chǎng)和體育館的英語(yǔ)名稱(chēng)的寫(xiě)法；

3.為表達(dá)較復(fù)雜，可適當(dāng)使用分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)或定語(yǔ)、強(qiáng)調(diào)句等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。