假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(/\)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計分。
3 必須按答題要求做題，否則不計分。
Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends, while I chose to take a part-time job to gain experiences and earn some money. I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope. The pay were 10 cents per envelope. I headed for the company, feel sure I would easy finish 300 envelops in five hours and to earn the money. Actually, I only finished 200. Now, I fully understand how hard is to earn money. Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.


【小題1】decide改成decided
【小題2】experiences改成 experience
【小題3】after改成 for
【小題4】envelope 改成envelopes
【小題5】were改成was
【小題6】feel改成 feeling
【小題7】easy改成easily
【小題8】去掉to   
【小題9】在hard 后加it 
【小題10】we改成 us

解析試題分析：文章講述作者寒假在一家公司做兼職的經(jīng)歷，通過這件事，作者了解掙錢是很不容易的事情。
【小題1】去年冬天，我的同學決定和朋友去旅游。因為是：Last winter vacation所以用一般過去式： decide改成decided
【小題2】而我選擇做一份兼職工作獲得經(jīng)驗，掙些錢。Experience做為“經(jīng)驗”講的時候，是不可數(shù)名詞。
【小題3】我從老師那里得知附近的一個公司在找書法好的學生在信封上寫地址。Look after“照顧”，改成 look for尋找，
【小題4】envelope 是可數(shù)名詞，這里是復數(shù)，改成envelopes
【小題5】報酬是每個信封10便士。這句話的主語是the pay，所以謂語是單數(shù)：were改成was
【小題6】我前往公司，確信我5個小時可以輕松的完成300個信封并掙些錢。這里用現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語：feel改成 feeling
【小題7】easy是形容詞，做表語或定語，這里修飾動詞finish，需要副詞，改成easily
【小題8】finish 300 envelops 和 earn the money是并列關系，去掉to   
【小題9】現(xiàn)在我理解掙錢是多么難啊。這里使用it做形式主語，在hard 后加it 
【小題10】走出教室對我們所有的人都是很必要的。介詞for后面接賓格：we改成 us
考點：考查短文改錯

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