Question

1．以下是China Daily報道的中國和其他3國人均年閱讀量的對比表．

Country	Israel	Japan	France	China
Books/per person	68	44	24	4.77

該報現(xiàn)以"My Reading Plan"為題征稿．請你寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文投稿，正確表述表格內(nèi)容，闡明讀書的意義，并制定出你自己的讀書計劃．
As is showed in the chart，we can see the annual average number of reading books in China is the least in the four countries．People in Israel have affection for reading books in particular．
It is well known that books teach us to learn life，truth，science and many other useful things．They increase our knowledge，broaden our minds and strengthen our character．In other words，they are our good teachers and wise friends．Reading is a good thing，but we must pay great attention to the choice of books．It is true that we can derive benefits from good books．
I made a plan about reading books．In my plan I put that I would like to read 50 books this year at least，including professional books about my English and career which I could learn more from these books and some other books like management，Internet and English novels．I planned to read one book every week．There are 52 weeks in every year，then I can finish 50 books easily．I think it is important to split my plan into little ones based on every week，then I have time limit for every book．Let me suppose that every book I will read have 300 hundred pages on average，then I need to finish 40 pages everyday，that is not too hard for me．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇圖表+提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文，正確表述表格內(nèi)容，闡明讀書的意義，并制定出你自己的讀書計劃．
寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．正確表述表格內(nèi)容； 2．闡明讀書的意義；3．制定自己的讀書計劃．
重要短語：have affection for（喜歡），teach sb to do sth（教某人做某事），increase one's knowledge（增加知識），broaden one's minds（拓寬思維），pay great attention to（注意），benefit from （從…獲益），plan to do sth（計劃做某事），split sth into （分解成），on average（平均），need to do（需要做某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．As is showed in the chart，we can see the annual average number of reading books in China is the least in the four countries．
此處是關(guān)系代詞"as"引導(dǎo)的非限制性從句，主句為"we can see the annual average number of reading books in China is the least in the four countries"，關(guān)系代詞"as"在從句中作主語，意為"正如"．
【高分句型二】
2．It is well known that books teach us to learn life，truth，science and many other useful things．
此處是主語從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+過去分詞+that+從句"．
【高分句型三】
3．In my plan I put that①I would like to read 50 books this year at least，including professional books about my English and career ②which I could learn more from these books and some other books like management，Internet and English novels．
①此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．
②此句是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語．
【高分句型四】
4．①I think it is important to split my plan into little ones②based on every week．
①此處是省略了"that的賓語從句．
②此處是由過去分詞短語"based on"作狀語，主句為"it is important to split my plan into little ones"．

解答 As is showed in the chart，we can see the annual average number of reading books in China is the least in the four countries．【高分句型一】People in Israel have affection for reading books in particular．（闡述表格）
It is well known that books teach us to learn life，truth，science and many other useful things．【高分句型二】They increase our knowledge，broaden our minds and strengthen our character．In other words，they are our good teachers and wise friends．Reading is a good thing，but we must pay great attention to the choice of books．It is true that we can derive benefits from good books．（讀書的意義）
I made a plan about reading books．In my plan I put that I would like to read 50 books this year at least，including professional books about my English and career which I could learn more from these books and some other books like management，Internet and English novels．【高分句型三】
I planned to read one book every week．There are 52 weeks in every year，then I can finish 50 books easily．I think it is important to split my plan into little ones based on every week，then I have time limit for every book．【高分句型四】Let me suppose that every book I will read have 300 hundred pages on average，then I need to finish 40 pages everyday，that is not too hard for me．（讀書計劃）

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．