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假如你是在暑假里去上海參觀世博會(huì)的，而有些同學(xué)業(yè)準(zhǔn)備國(guó)慶假期去，希望你給他們提些建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文。
要點(diǎn)：
1．乘坐世博直達(dá)地鐵專線，游客可持世博門票進(jìn)入馬當(dāng)路地鐵站，通過安檢后可免費(fèi)乘坐世博地鐵專線—13號(hào)線。
2．預(yù)約參觀一些熱門館（包括中國(guó)館），以避免排隊(duì)等候過長(zhǎng)時(shí)間。
3．自備一些食物，因?yàn)閳@內(nèi)就餐需排隊(duì)等候。
4．其他建議……（考生自由發(fā)揮）。
注意：
1．內(nèi)容包括以上要點(diǎn)，但不要逐句翻譯。
2．詞數(shù)：150左可，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．參考詞匯：pavilion展館    security inspection安檢  reserve for預(yù)約
Some tips for visiting Shanghai Expo
Looking around the Shanghai Expo Site is not so easy to the visitors, although Shanghai Expo is going well now. Transportation, formalities of access, food and drink should be the first for you to consider. Here are some tips for you.

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Some tips for visiting Shanghai Expo
Looking around the Shanghai Expo Site is not so easy to the visitors, although Shanghai Expo is going well now. Transportation, formalities of access, food and drink should be the first for you to consider. Here are some tips for you.
Firstly, take the expo special nonstop subway. You may enter the Madang Road subway station with the expo ticket and take the special nonstop subway which is No.13 for free after passing the security inspection.
Secondly, reserve for your visiting. You need to reserve for the access to several pavilions, including China pavilion. You’d better get to the expo entry early and pass the security inspection, otherwise, perhaps a long line is waiting for you.
Thirdly, bring some snacks with you. You might have to be in a long line waiting to eat in a restaurant at meal times. So it is wise to eat some snacks to avoid suffering hunger.
Fourthly, buy some water or drinks after entering the site. Since you are not allowed to take any water or drinks into the site, you’d better find a store to buy some.
In general, I do hope you will enjoy your visit to Shanghai Expo.

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