Question

【題目】最近，你校英語園地開辟了一個(gè)專欄，請同學(xué)們圍繞 “Shall we give a helping hand to the old who fall on the ground?”這一話題展開討論。請根據(jù)下圖的提示寫一篇英語短文。

注意：1.詞數(shù)在100左右。

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】From the picture we can see that an old man fell on the ground and many people were standing around watching with sympathy,but no one dared to help him up. This is what happens in our society nowadays.

The reason for this is very simple.A few people are dishonest and they will frame those who help them.Some even pretend to be knocked down.Though mangy people around are willing to help them,they don’t trust them and they are afraid of getting themselves int trouble.

In my opinion, on the one hand ,we should all help each other Respecting and taking care of the old is a traditional Chinese virtue.I meet with such a case, I will call 120 first and then do what I can help him.On the other hand, people should be honest so that we coutrust each other.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇看圖作文，圍繞 “Shall we give a helping hand to the old who fall on the ground?”這一話題展開討論，寫一篇英語短文。根據(jù)所給圖片，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇看圖作文，文章內(nèi)容符合圖片要求，觀點(diǎn)明確，語言精練，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)詞匯和句子。we can see that an old man fell on the ground and many people were standing around watching with sympathy,but no one dared to help him up.句中使用賓語從句；This is what happens in our society nowadays.句中what引導(dǎo)表語從句，起雙重作用；A few people are dishonest and they will frame those who help them.who引導(dǎo)定語從句；Though mangy people around are willing to help them,they don’t trust them and they are afraid of getting themselves int trouble.句中運(yùn)用Though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句；people should be honest so that we coutrust each other.結(jié)果狀語從句巧妙至極；另外，The reason for---，pretend to be knocked down，In my opinion, on the one hand ,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。