Question

假如你是李華，你的一位美國朋友Jane在中國學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國，你們準(zhǔn)備為她舉辦歡送會。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給她寫一封不少于100詞的e-mail
寫作要點：
1.祝賀她順利通過考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為他驕傲：
2.感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語；
3.邀請她參加歡送會，并告知歡送會相關(guān)事宜。
1）時間：星期六晚六點；
2）地點：陽光俱樂部（the Sun Club）302房間；
3）路線：在她所住賓館乘坐332路公共汽車可直達(dá)。
參考詞匯：歡送會 farewell party
郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams.                           
                                                                               
                                                                               
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
It's a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6：00 p．m.? We'll have dinner together. By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一封電子郵件，Jane在中國學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國，寫電子郵件邀請她參加歡送會。文章的要點都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生發(fā)揮的余地較小，只需要翻譯成英語即可，寫作的時候要把所有的要點都包括在內(nèi)，不要遺漏。同時注意使用被動語態(tài)，倒裝句等不同的句式，讓文章充滿變化，不要那么的死板。同時要使用高級的詞匯和詞組提高文章的檔次。
【亮點說明】I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. 這句話用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句， We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. 這句話里面的詞組be pround of和動詞appreciate使用的很好，還有We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.這句話里面含有定語從句，It's a pity that you have to go back soon! 這句話里面用了it做形式主語，that引導(dǎo)真正的主語從句， By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.