One day, while my friend and I was traveling through           76__________

Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little       77__________

money. We decided stop at a village market to buy              78__________

something to eat. We choose the cheapest biscuits and           79.__________

ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great.            80__________

“Let’s got some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they           81__________”

really taste well.” My friend could read some German, but        82__________

I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name.         83._________

She looked at it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?”     84._________

I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said.               85._________

One day, while my friend and I was traveling through          76   were  

Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little      77   not  

money. We decided ^ stop at a village market to buy           78 _  to  

something to eat. We choose the cheapest biscuits and          79.   chose 

ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great.          80   them 

“Let’s got some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they         81   get   

really taste well.” My friend could read some German, but       82   good 

I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name.       83.   go 

She looked at it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?”    84.   why 

I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said.              85.   √ 


解析:

    短文改錯(cuò)中出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤基本都是學(xué)生平時(shí)在英語寫作時(shí)容易出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤，錯(cuò)誤類型涉及到各個(gè)方面，除了語法錯(cuò)誤外，行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤是一個(gè)常見的考點(diǎn)，也就是要求學(xué)生根據(jù)上下文的邏輯關(guān)系判斷正誤，而獨(dú)立地看一個(gè)句子，是沒有錯(cuò)誤，例如第77小題。

短文改錯(cuò)的重點(diǎn)和難點(diǎn)也在于行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如第83小題，從邏輯來看，這里應(yīng)該有因果關(guān)系，所以把a(bǔ)nd改為so。

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