Question

18．假定你是李華，校英文報Growing pains欄目專門解答中學(xué)生的煩惱問題．現(xiàn)欄目收到一封來信．請根據(jù)這封信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信．

Dear Editor． I am really angry with my parents recently．Next Sunday is my birthday．My parents promised 10buy a cell phone for me as my birthday present this year．But now when I ask about the birthday present they say they have changed their ideas，because they worry about my study if I get a new cell phone since the final exam is coming soon．They say a cell phone may take up too much of my time．I believe I am old enough to control myself，but they don't believe me．What's more，they broke their promise! Li Yan

內(nèi)容要求：
1．理解父母良苦用心；
2．手機(jī)有利有弊；
3．給出你的建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好．
Dear Li Yan，
It's normal to have these feelings．As a saying says，to be appreciated as a parent is quite unusual．It is quite sure that parents arewilling to do their best to give us as possible as they can．We should understand the good intentions of parents．They must have been for your own good．As a high school student，our studies areimportant and very heavy．There aremany advantages ofmobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checking information and so on．But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life．We should try our best to study hard and make great progress．
I hope things will be better for you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
It is quite sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can
這是相當(dāng)確定的，父母都愿意盡自己最大的努力給我們盡可能好的．
高分句型二：
But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life．
但也有很多危害，如使用不當(dāng)，確實(shí)會影響學(xué)習(xí)和生活．

解答 Dear Li Yan，
It's normal to have these feelings．As a saying says，to be appreciated as a parent is quite unusual．It is quite sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can（高分句型一）．We should understand the good intentions of parents．They must have been for your own good．As a high school student，our studies are important and very heavy．There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checking information and so on．But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life（高分句型二）．We should try our best to study hard and make great progress．
I hope things will be better for you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．