Question

假定你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“當(dāng)代中學(xué)生應(yīng)具備的最重要的品質(zhì)”的英語演講比賽。請按下列要求寫一篇120詞左右的演講稿。短文的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。最重要品質(zhì)主要包括：

1.有強(qiáng)烈的求知欲；

2.善良、誠實(shí)、謙虛、自信；

3.勤奮、執(zhí)著、積極向上；

4.有強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感。

參考詞匯:樂觀的optimistic 執(zhí)著persistent 勤奮diligent

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That’s all.Thank you.

Answer 1

Hello,everyone!I’m glad to make a speech here.My topic is: What are the most important qualities that middle school students today should have?

In my opinion,the most important qualities can be summarized as follows. First,a strong desire for knowledge is of great importance because it motivates us to seek for knowledge constantly. Second ,kindness, honesty,modesty and self-confidence are also important qualities,which are part of our personality and contribute to our future development.Third,diligence,persistence and optimism are also essential for us because those who are more optimistic, diligent and persistent are likely to succeed no matter what they do. What’s more, having a strong sense of responsibility is equally important because we should be responsible for life and our future.

That’s all.Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語in one’s opinion在某人看來；be of importance 重要；seek for 尋找；What’s more而且；Second ,kindness, honesty,modesty and self-confidence are also important qualities,which are part of our personality and contribute to our future development.這個(gè)句子中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；Third,diligence,persistence and optimism are also essential for us because those who are more optimistic, diligent and persistent are likely to succeed no matter what they do這個(gè)句子不僅僅運(yùn)用到定語從句還運(yùn)用到no matter what 引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句；

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文