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10．假設(shè)你是張華，班里從美國(guó)轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)Mike，他無(wú)法理解同學(xué)們經(jīng)常談?wù)摰?網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友"，感到很苦惱．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封信，信中須包括：
1．幫他分析網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友的利弊；
2．指出解決網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友欺騙的方法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to know that you feel confused about making friends on line at your new Class．
…
Best regards．
Yours truly，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息班里從美國(guó)轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)Mike，他無(wú)法理解同學(xué)們經(jīng)常談?wù)摰?網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友"，感到很苦惱．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：幫他分析網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友的利弊；指出解決網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友欺騙的方法． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：laugh at 嘲笑；in my opinion 在我看來(lái)；make friends 交朋友；all over the world 全世界；every coin has two sides 事有利弊；take measures 采取措施；adapt to 適應(yīng)；as soon as possible 盡快
I have ever read a story，which made me greatly shocked．（高分句型一）
Before meeting an on-line friend，they have to ensure that all the information concerning him or her is true．（高分句型二）
To solve the problems concerning making friends on line，I think，the government should take strong measures to punish those who cheat people on line．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
　　I'm sorry to know that you feel confused about making friends on line at your new class．I have ever read a story，which made me greatly shocked．（高分句型一）Such a kind-hearted girl was cheated and laughed at by the cheat．She wanted to help the boy，but what the boy said was a trap．
　　In my opinion，making friends on line is a good way to communicate with people from all over the world．However，every coin has two sides．When people try to make friends on line，they have to be very careful and cautious．Before meeting an on-line friend，they have to ensure that all the information concerning him or her is true．（高分句型二）
　　To solve the problems concerning making friends on line，I think，the government should take strong measures to punish those who cheat people on line．（高分句型三）As for those Internet users，they should be cautious when making friends on line．
　　I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．
　　Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                               Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                Zhang Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀(guān)性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．