Question

假如你是李華，學(xué)校組織了一項(xiàng)“有煩惱向誰(shuí)說(shuō)”的調(diào)查活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信，反映相關(guān)的情況。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果（如圖所示）以及持相應(yīng)想法的理由。

[寫作要求]

只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容（不含已給句子）。

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

One possible version:

Dear Editor,

Recently we have carried out a survey—To whom do you go when in trouble? 61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble. The reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to for the reason that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences. However, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others’ business and some of them find it hard to get along with others.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，這道題目有個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是要結(jié)合已給出的圖表，所以首先必須看懂圖表，并且要用第一人稱來(lái)寫。寫信時(shí)不能只是生硬的寫出調(diào)查結(jié)果，一定要闡明持相應(yīng)想法的理由。需要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意題目要求只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容（不含已給句子）。

考點(diǎn)：書信類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書信類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。