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5．隨著經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，環(huán)境污染日益嚴重，洪水、干旱（drought）等自然災害接連不斷地發(fā)生，霧霾（smog）、沙塵暴等天氣頻繁出現(xiàn)，這一切嚴重威脅著我們的生活．怎樣減少污染呢？請你根據(jù)下列提示以How to Protect the Environment為題為你校校報寫一篇文章．
1．政府應(yīng)通過新的法律，控制工業(yè)污染．
2．公眾應(yīng)該提高環(huán)保意識，改變自己的生活方式，如節(jié)電、節(jié)水等等．
3．作為中學生，我們應(yīng)該…．
注意：
1．內(nèi)容可適當增加，字數(shù)不少于100詞．
2．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
How to Protect the EnvironmentAs we all know，with the development of economy，our environment is being polluted more and more seriously．As a result，natural disasters such as floods and droughts continuously happen and extreme weather including smogs as well as sandstorms appear now and then，threatening human to a great extent．（高分句型一）In order to make the earth a better place for us to live on，in my opinion，we should do something as follows：
First of all，the government should pass new laws to prevent industrial pollution．What's more，the public are required to raise the awareness of protecting the environment and change their life style．In their life not only should they save electricity and water but also they are supposed to have waste materials recycled．（高分句型二）
As students，we should take action in our daily life to protect the environment around us．For example，when doing shopping，we will try to use environment-friendly shopping bags instead of plastic ones to reduce"white pollution"； when going out，it is a good idea to take buses rather than take private cars to reduce waste gas in the air．
All in all，only when everyone does what he/she can to protect the environment can we have a more beautiful earth．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息隨著經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，環(huán)境污染日益嚴重，洪水、干旱（drought）等自然災害接連不斷地發(fā)生，霧霾（smog）、沙塵暴等天氣頻繁出現(xiàn)，這一切嚴重威脅著我們的生活．怎樣減少污染呢？請你根據(jù)下列提示以How to Protect the Environment為題為你校校報寫一篇文章，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：政府應(yīng)通過新的法律，控制工業(yè)污染．公眾應(yīng)該提高環(huán)保意識，改變自己的生活方式，如節(jié)電、節(jié)水等等．作為中學生，我們應(yīng)該…．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：As a result結(jié)果是；as well as也，和；In order to以便，為了；in my opinion以我的觀點來看；First of all首先；What's more而且；All in all總之；
As a result，natural disasters such as floods and droughts continuously happen and extreme weather including smogs as well as sandstorms appear now and then，threatening human to a great extent．（高分句型一）
In their life not only should they save electricity and water but also they are supposed to have waste materials recycled．（高分句型二）
All in all，only when everyone does what he/she can to protect the environment can we have a more beautiful earth．（高分句型三）

解答 How to Protect the Environment
       As we all know，with the development of economy，our environment is being polluted more and more seriously．As a result，natural disasters such as floods and droughts continuously happen and extreme weather including smogs as well as sandstorms appear now and then，threatening human to a great extent．（高分句型一）In order to make the earth a better place for us to live on，in my opinion，we should do something as follows：
      First of all，the government should pass new laws to prevent industrial pollution．What's more，the public are required to raise the awareness of protecting the environment and change their life style．In their life not only should they save electricity and water but also they are supposed to have waste materials recycled．（高分句型二）
      As students，we should take action in our daily life to protect the environment around us．For example，when doing shopping，we will try to use environment-friendly shopping bags instead of plastic ones to reduce"white pollution"； when going out，it is a good idea to take buses rather than take private cars to reduce waste gas in the air．
      All in all，only when everyone does what he/she can to protect the environment can we have a more beautiful earth．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．