Question

假如你叫李華，剛剛升入高中，你在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到一些問題，想得到老師的幫助，并想給班級的英語老師提一些建議，以幫助自己學(xué)好英語。下面表格中只給了簡單的提示，請你結(jié)合自己的實際情況給英語老師寫一封求助信，內(nèi)容如下：

學(xué)習(xí)英語時遇到的問題	1.生詞多，記憶有難度 2....
向英語老師提出的建議	1.介紹一些學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法 2....

字數(shù)：100左右。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear teacher,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help.                                 

                                                                    

                                                                    

Yours.

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear teacher,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.

Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily？ In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.

Yours.

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，話題是關(guān)于自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語時所遇見的困難向老師說明并求助。文章的要點基本上都給了出來，考生需要翻譯成英語。靈活變化表達，適度進行改寫。在寫作的時候使用高級的詞匯和各種句型，讓文章充滿變化。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，盡量使用諺語來提高文章的檔次。

考點：考查提綱類短文寫作

點評：提綱類短文寫作的關(guān)鍵在于要把所有的要點都包括在內(nèi)，不能有遺漏。要靈活運用多種句式，讓文章充滿變化，注意語法規(guī)則的使用，使用高級的句型或者詞匯要與個人的能力相結(jié)合，盡量不要出錯。