Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
The 11.11 Shopping Festival, as the event is now called, occurs on the day known in China as Single’s Day, a holiday on which young people cry about or celebrate being single. Five years ago the shopping website Alibaba began promoting the day as a shopping festival, and it has now turned to be the country’s busiest day for online sellers, millions of shopping lovers and thousands of delivery companies.
Every Nov. 11, millions of Chinese shoppers go to the e-commerce websites operated by Alibaba Group Holding Ltd., which is the world’s largest e-commerce platform: The total value of goods sold last year by Taobao and Tmall, the company’s two main shopping sites, topped one trillion yuan ($160 billion), larger than last year’s totals for Amazon.com and eBay combined.
But not everyone likes shopping on that day. Chen Jing, a lawyer in Beijing, says, “Nobody knows what anything is really worth. Online shoppers are guided by shallow tips (“this is cheaper than that”) and vague emotions (“it just feels like a good deal”) rather than knowledge and deliberate thinking.” Critics like Chen complain that people believe the most popular day of the year to shop is the best day of the year to buy anything. But the fact is that the prices of many items on that day are not the lowest of the year and usually shoppers buy lots of things they don’t need.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2. 以約120個(gè)詞就“網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物”的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括：
（1）你對(duì)文中所描述的網(wǎng)賂購(gòu)物現(xiàn)象的看法；
（2）描述你或他人網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的經(jīng)歷；
（3）說(shuō)明網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物時(shí)應(yīng)注意的問(wèn)題。
【寫作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Answer 1

The article describes how the Chinese festival of Single’s Day has become a most profitable online shopping holiday. It also points out the risk of buying unnecessary things at high prices.
I thinkonline shopping has made the lives of many people much easier and more enriched, which partly explains the Nov. 11 e-shopping phenomenon.
Personally I have been able to buy many things online that I could not find in our local stores, such as an old Japanese comic I bought from a comic book website recently. Shopping online has also allowed me to save a lot of money. This year, for example, I purchased a pair of glasses from an American website. These glasses cost 1500 yuan at the department store near my home. But I paid only 100 dollars online, less than half the department store price!!!
Of course we must be careful when shopping online. We should only use websites that have a good reputation for quality and honesty otherwise our personal information may be stolen and the goods we buy may be of poor quality.

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時(shí)盡量使用自己不會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。 
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如point out，such as，allow sb. to do，for example , have a good reputation for，be of poor quality.；還運(yùn)用句型which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：and，but，otherwise 等等。