Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed. I have started to think about other people after I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming the different person.
I think my change started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just want to get my degree and be left alone. I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely. That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun. So I tried an experiment. I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help. That was real a big step for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today. 

Answer 1

【小題1】I 和really之間加have。
【小題2】after →before
【小題3】the →a
【小題4】want →wanted
【小題5】That →It
【小題6】besides → but/except 
【小題7】friend →friends
【小題8】whether→if/when
【小題9】real →really
【小題10】them → whom或者去掉are或者two前加and。

解析試題分析：以自我為中心的人就不會(huì)有朋友，當(dāng)我意識(shí)到這一點(diǎn)時(shí)，我開(kāi)始改變自己，努力為別人著想，幫助有麻煩的人，終于我交到了好朋友。
【小題1】根據(jù)in the past two years 這個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)可知用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。所以在I 和really之間加have。
【小題2】應(yīng)該理解為先人后己。所以after →before。
【小題3】成為一個(gè)不一樣的人。沒(méi)有特指。所以the →a。
【小題4】講述過(guò)去的事，要用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。所以want →wanted。
【小題5】It seems that …是固定句式，意為似乎……。所以That →It。
【小題6】everyone后面用but/except表示除了….大家都……。所以besides → but/except 。
【小題7】交朋友應(yīng)該是make friends。
【小題8】如果/當(dāng)朋友有困難，我就主動(dòng)幫助他們。所以whether→if/when。
【小題9】be 動(dòng)詞后用副詞修飾。所以real →really。
【小題10】最后一句，要么后面是定語(yǔ)從句，要么是獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，要么前后是并列句。所以有三種變法：them → whom或者去掉are或者two前加and。
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)。