Question

假設(shè)你是班長，請結(jié)合以下要點，給同學(xué)們談?wù)勔恍┎唤】档纳�活方式及其可能造成的危害，并給同學(xué)提出一些建議。請據(jù)此寫一篇100詞左右的英語發(fā)言稿。
不健康的生活方式：
1.缺乏體育鍛煉，久坐不動
2.睡眠不足
3.不吃早餐
4.抽煙、喝酒、沉溺于網(wǎng)上游戲或手機
注意：1.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；      2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
Dear fellow students,
I’m going to talk about some unhealthy lifestyles and the harm they may lead to.
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Answer 1

Dear fellow students,
I’m going to talk about some unhealthy lifestyles and the harm they may lead to.
In our daily life, we can see many of us lead an unhealthy life. Here are some examples: some of us don’t take regular physical exercise and many lack sleep. Second, others keep on sitting for a long time. What’s worse, some don’t have a habit of eating breakfast. What is the worst is that some students even have been addicted to smoking and drinking, which may ruin their health.
There is no doubt that these unhealthy lifestyles do great harm to our health. If we don’t change our way of life, we’ll break down sooner or later. Therefore it is important for us to develop healthy lifestyles and get rid of the above bad habits. Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy our life.
That’s all. Thank you.

試題分析：題目要求寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們介紹不健康的生活方式和可能存在的危害。作文不宜過長，在100詞左右；可以分兩部分來寫，第一部分介紹不健康的生活方式；第二部分提出建議。使用第一人稱進(jìn)行作文，注意單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點符號的正確使用；多使用定語從句、非謂語動詞、倒裝等語法知識。
【亮點說明】范文注意使用Second, What’s worse, Therefore等來表示列舉和銜接前后文，使作文顯得條理清晰，銜接緊湊；
范文使用了一些固定短語：talk about；lead to；lead an unhealthy life；be addicted to；break down；sooner or later；do great harm to；get rid of等，使作文內(nèi)容更加充實；
范文使用了很多重要的語法知識：定語從句they may lead to；主語從句和表語從句What is the worst is that some students even have been addicted to smoking and drinking；非限制性定語從句which may ruin their health；there be句型There is no doubt that these unhealthy lifestyles do great harm to our health.；條件狀語從句If we don’t change our way of life；固定句型it is important for us to develop healthy lifestyles；倒裝句Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy our life.等，使作文變得句式多樣，具有層次感。