Question

假設(shè)你是黃山中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李健。你校將于10月1至2日接待來(lái)自瑞士某中學(xué)的學(xué)生訪問(wèn)團(tuán)。你受學(xué)校委托，負(fù)責(zé)安排他們?cè)邳S山市的2天交流參觀活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給該團(tuán)的領(lǐng)隊(duì)Amman先生寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，介紹活動(dòng)計(jì)劃并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由，最后需征求對(duì)方意見(jiàn)。

10月1日：上午參觀學(xué)校，與學(xué)校學(xué)生座談（學(xué)校生活、文化差異等）；

中午與我校學(xué)生共同進(jìn)餐（ 自助形式，以中式菜肴為主）；

下午與我校學(xué)生進(jìn)行友誼籃球賽；

10月2日： 游覽黃山(中國(guó)名山，2002年與瑞士少女峰結(jié)為姊妹山)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100-120；

1.   可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

2.  信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：瑞士 Switzerland； 少女峰Jungfrau； 姊妹山twin-mountain

Dear Mr. Amman,

I am Li Jian, chairman of the Student Union, of Huangshan High School.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Amman,

I am Li Jian, chairman of the Student Union, from Huangshan High School. Glad to know that your delegation will visit our school on October 1^st and 2^nd, and I am responsible for arranging your activities here. My plan is as follows:

On the morning of October 1^st, we will show you around the school. Then a discussion will be held, which may cover the topics of school life, cultural differences, and etc, aiming to improve the mutual understanding. At noon, we will have a buffet lunch in the school dining room. To help you know more about our traditional customs and culture, we will be preparing some typical Chinese foods (rice, dumplings and noodles). The afternoon will see a friendly basketball match.

The following day (October 2^nd) will be an excursion day. Your delegation will go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous scenic spots in China, which also enjoys the twin-mountain relationship with Jungfrau--- Top of Europe in Switzerland.

How do you like the proposal? If you have some specific ideas, we will be glad to take them into consideration to make your trip more interesting and impressive!

Looking forward to your early reply!

Best wishes

Sincerely

Li Jian

【解析】

試題分析：這是一封書(shū)信，介紹在黃山市的2天交流參觀活動(dòng)，寫(xiě)的時(shí)候要注意書(shū)信的格式，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給出了一個(gè)提綱，分別按日期介紹活動(dòng)安排，要以時(shí)間為順序清楚的表達(dá)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，要選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。Your delegation will go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous scenic spots in China, which also enjoys the twin-mountain relationship with Jungfrau--- Top of Europe in Switzerland.

這句話比較長(zhǎng)，使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，用的很好，還要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。

考點(diǎn)：考查書(shū)信類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：除了注意書(shū)信的格式，表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備也很重要，要點(diǎn)不能有遺漏或者省略。也不能按照表格寫(xiě)出提綱式，所以在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要變換句式，同時(shí)要注意因?yàn)槭青]件要寫(xiě)得親切直白。