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以前人們進(jìn)行遠(yuǎn)距離交流的唯一途徑是寫(xiě)信，可是隨著科技進(jìn)步，人們?cè)趥鬟f信息方面有了更多的選擇。特別是近年來(lái)，隨著電話的普及，動(dòng)手寫(xiě)信的人越來(lái)越少了，于是有人認(rèn)為電話終會(huì)代替寫(xiě)信，請(qǐng)你展開(kāi)想象力，以Will Phones Kill Letter Writing為題寫(xiě)一篇作文來(lái)闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。要求合理想象，論證充分。詞數(shù)100左右。
Will Phones Kill Letter Writing
                                                                    
                                                                    

Answer 1

Will Phones Kill Letter Writing
Nowadays，we speak so much and write so little that  some people begin to suspect that phones will replace letter writing. However widely used it is today，I don't think the phone will take the place of letters.
There are at least two reasons why this will not happen. For one thing, although phones have already taken over many roles traditionally played by the letter, there are certain areas  in  which  black  and  white  sincerity  and confirmation is still a must. For another, in no way can a quick phone conversation convey as much as a well ­worded letter does.

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中出現(xiàn)了一些高級(jí)短語(yǔ)：take the place of 代替，take over接管，還有復(fù)雜的多變的句型：we speak so much and write so little that  some people begin to suspect that phones will replace letter writing.這句話用了so…that句型， However widely used it is today，I don't think the phone will take the place of letters.這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句， There are at least two reasons why this will not happen. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，although phones have already taken over many roles traditionally played by the letter, there are certain areas  in  which  black  and  white  sincerity  and confirmation is still a must. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，in no way can a quick phone conversation convey as much as a well ­worded letter does. 這句話是倒裝句，還有文章還使用了For one thing, For another這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。