Dear Editor,
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students My schoolmates have different opinions. Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel safe especially in time of trouble. Besides, We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies.
While others think differently. First, the cell-phone in not a must in school, as there are some IC phones there, making it easy to call others. Second, many students often play e -games and send e-massages with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study. Worse is to come, it will result in a great waste of time and money.
In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life. But it doesn't mean we can use freely in school. (it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.)
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
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