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16．南昌擁擠的道路給人們帶來不便，引發(fā)社會廣泛熱議．是否應(yīng)該擁有私家車，有人贊成，有人反對．請你以Whether or not---Owning a private car為題，用英語論述人們的觀點，并給出你自己的觀點．
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Whether or not---Owning a private car
Nowadays，masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Nanchang City，causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion．Different ideas vary from person to person．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．
（高分句型一）And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends．
該句型使用where…引導(dǎo)一個賓語從句，句意為：有車，他們就可以去他們想去的地方；
（高分句型二）They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street，a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off，polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people．
as引導(dǎo)方式狀語從句，隨著…；該句還使用被動結(jié)構(gòu)，has been given off；polluting…是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，表示結(jié)果；
高級詞匯：rely on 依靠；object to 反對；restrict限制；

解答 Whether or not---Owning a private car
Nowadays，masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Nanchang City，causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion．Different ideas vary from person to person．
      Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car．It gives a much greater degree of comfort．For example，they are no longer forced to rely on public transport．（高分句型一）And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends．
     However，others strongly object to owning private cars．（高分句型二）They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street，a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off，polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people．What's more，in fact，private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem．
    Personally，I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．