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3．假定你是李華，最近你要為你們學(xué)校的英文報寫一篇關(guān)于"中歐友好日"暨中歐環(huán)保 小使者活動走進(jìn)歐盟學(xué)校的新聞報道．
內(nèi)容要點：
1．中國學(xué)生表演了武術(shù)、書法、氣功等中國特色項目；
2．歐洲學(xué)生上演了有關(guān)環(huán)保的戲劇節(jié)目；
3．活動的意義．
 注意：
1．詞數(shù) 100 左右（開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)）
2．可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫． 參考詞匯：武術(shù) martial arts 氣功 Qigong
On the China-Europe Friendship Day，many Chinese students and their European friends got together at a EU's middle school．Chinese students puton many performances featuring Chinese culture，including Chinese martial arts，Chinese calligraphy，Qigongand soon．（高分句型一）They were very successful，which was really abig hit．The performances by the European students were also wonderful．They performed amoving play which was focused on the environment protection．（高分句型二）It has raised our awareness of protecting our Earth．
Through these activities，students from China and Europe can learn from each other better．It also contributes to abetter understanding of different cultures．Consequently，they both can do alot to make our society a harmonious world．We believe thatthough people are from different backgrounds，they can also appreciate each other and build solid friendship．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，最近你要為你們學(xué)校的英文報寫一篇關(guān)于"中歐友好日"暨中歐環(huán)保 小使者活動走進(jìn)歐盟學(xué)校的新聞報道，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：中國學(xué)生表演了武術(shù)、書法、氣功等中國特色項目；歐洲學(xué)生上演了有關(guān)環(huán)保的戲劇節(jié)目；活動的意義．  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：put on many performances表演節(jié)目；including包括； contribute to有助于；Consequently結(jié)果；
Chinese students put on many performances featuring Chinese culture，including Chinese martial arts，Chinese calligraphy，Qigong and so on．（高分句型一）
They performed a moving play which was focused on the environment protection．（高分句型二）
We believe that though people are from different backgrounds，they can also appreciate each other and build solid friendship．（高分句型三）

解答 On the China-Europe Friendship Day，many Chinese students and their European friends got together at a EU's middle school．
       Chinese students put on many performances featuring Chinese culture，including Chinese martial arts，Chinese calligraphy，Qigong and so on．（高分句型一）They were very successful，which was really a big hit．The performances by the European students were also wonderful．They performed a moving play which was focused on the environment protection．（高分句型二）It has raised our awareness of protecting our Earth．
       Through these activities，students from China and Europe can learn from each other better．It also contributes to a better understanding of different cultures．Consequently，they both can do a lot to make our society a harmonious world．We believe that though people are from different backgrounds，they can also appreciate each other and build solid friendship．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．