Question

假如你是李華，你和你的家人去朋友Cathy所在的城市倫敦旅游，回來后你想對她表達自已的感謝之情。請根據(jù)以下要點給Cathy寫一封信：

1.感謝Cathy的熱情款待

2.在倫敦玩的非常開心

3.倫敦的風景和美食令人印象深刻

4.邀請Cathy來中國旅游

要求：1.短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整， 意思連貫，語言流暢，語法正確，符合邏輯

2.字數(shù)：100-- 120詞左右

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Cathy,

Hello! Thank you for your help and good treat while we were traveling in London. You were so kind and friendly to treat us with good meals, and show us around the city. It is really nice to visit London, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a good impression. I had a great time there and learned a lot about London. Cathy, are you free these days? I would like to invite you to visit China. I'll show you around the interesting places, such as Beijing and Xi'an.

Looking forward to your reply.

Best regards

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一封感謝信，要點都給出來了，審題時注意，要包含：1.感謝Cathy的熱情款待

2.在倫敦玩的非常開心3.倫敦的風景和美食令人印象深刻4.邀請Cathy來中國旅游，要把要點寫全，不能遺漏，但不能逐字逐句的翻譯，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調(diào)句型準確表述。如范文的句子：It is really nice to visit London, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a good impression.既用了it做形式主語又用了whose引導的定語從句。

考點：考查感謝信

點評：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，本文運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。