Question

【題目】書面表達

假設你應邀參加學校組織的“英語學習師生座談會”，請你根據下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，簡單介紹自己英語學習的情況，并對學校今后的英語教學提出建議。

自己英語學習的情況	1、英語學習的目標；
	2、英語學習的方法；
	3、課外自學的途徑；
	……
對學校英語教學的建議	（請考生根據自己的經歷與感想，提出兩至三點建議。

注意：1、對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2、詞數100左右。開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

3、文中不得提及學生所在學校和本人姓名。

Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.

Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear teachers and schoolmates,it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I’m interested in English,and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally,it’s very important for me to learn English well.As everybody knows,vocabulary is an important part of language,just like bricks in a building.I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible.After class,I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio.

Now,I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what we have learned in order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.Finally, I suggest we have more English activities,such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于議論文，根據提示信息來闡明自己對英語學習的觀點。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象，行文要有邏輯和適當的連接詞。 3、注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。注意：注意：1、對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2、詞數100左右。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構，有恰當的連接詞使得文章條理清晰。比如After,Firstly,Secondly，Finally等連接詞的使用讓文章看起來思路清楚，同時運用了許多高級詞匯。句型多樣，如Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what we have learned in order to have a better grasp of it.是賓語從句，還有Dear teachers and schoolmates,it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.運用了it’s a great pleasure for sb. to do sth句型。Secondly,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。