Question

1．5月8日是母親節(jié)，某英文報社組織題為"What I will do to honor my mother"的征文活動，你有意參加．請用英語寫一篇短文，包括以下要點：
1．你打算做什么；
2．為什么要那么做．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文，闡述自己在母親節(jié)這一天打算做的事及原因．
寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點：1．你打算做什么； 2．為什么要那么做．
重要短語：fall on（降臨在），help sb with sth（幫助某人做某事），want to do（想要某人做某事） buy sth for sb（給某人買某物），a bit difficult（有一點困難），take good care of（照顧好），day and night（日日夜夜），under one's pillow （在枕頭下面）．
【高分句型一】
1．I want to say to my mother that I love her very much．
此處是連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，主句為"I want to say to my mother"．
【高分句型二】
2．However，as a boy，it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart．
此處是由形式主語"it"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+for sb to do sth"． 
【高分句型三】
3．I wish my mother had a wonderful mother's day．
此處是由"I wish+句子"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，從句中用虛擬語氣，結(jié)構(gòu)為"I wish+一般過去時的句子"，表示對現(xiàn)在情況的虛擬．

解答 Mother's Day falls on May 8th．Today is Mother's Day．I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework while others are going to buy some flowers for their mothers．I want to say to my mother that I love her very much．【高分句型一】However，as a boy，it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart．【高分句型二】I think only girls can do that．（打算做什么）
My mother is very kind．She takes good care of me day and night．She spends little money，but buys anything for me that I need．This time I must show my love and appreciation．I am going to give her a card and write like this，"I love you，Mother!"I am going to put it under her pillow．I wish my mother had a wonderful mother's day．（為什么要那么做）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．