Question

【題目】Years ago it was very difficult to travel from one place to another. The journeys were often long, tiring and dangerous. Today the picture has changed. Science has improved transportation and communication facilities a great deal. Traveling has become safer, more enjoyable and above all, more economical.

Traveling—whether within one’s country or abroad—brings many invaluable benefits. People travel for pleasure, business or for education and knowledge. In the world of yesterday most people were only able to read about strange and fascinating places across the mountains and seas. Later, with the coming of the cinema and television, man’s curiosity about faraway places with strange sounding names was further stirred up. Today man’s curiosity can be satisfied in luxurious comfort. There are first-class ships and airplanes to take him where his dreams lie.

We travel to increase our knowledge of the world in which we live. Knowledge obtained from books alone is not enough. New knowledge of different land and peoples enriches our mind and soul. Books generally do not give us a very true picture of lands beyond our shores. Some of them are even misleading.

【寫作內容】

1. 以約30個詞概括短文的要點；

2. 然后以約120個詞就“交通的發(fā)展給我們帶來什么”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括以下要點：

（1) 簡述從古到今交通方式的變化；

（2) 現(xiàn)代交通給我們帶來的好處，如快捷性、舒適性、經濟性及幫助我們擴大視野等；

（3) 現(xiàn)代交通給我們帶來的一些負面影響；

（4) 你如何評價現(xiàn)代交通？

【寫作要求】

1. 可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 標題自定。

3. 答案請寫在答題卷的相應位置上。

Answer 1

【答案】

What Does Modern Transportation Bring Us?

Science has made traveling much more convenient than before, and in turn, traveling brings us lots of benefits. We get happiness and know more about different places through the comfortable and convenient traveling.

Transportation has changed a lot during the past years. In ancient times, the fast way to travel was to ride a horse or carriage, while most people just walked. Then, people had bicycles, ships, cars and trains and now we have planes or even spaceships, which are much faster. Modern transportation helps us a lot. It offers us quicker and more comfortable traveling and brings people to closer contact. We can also get more knowledge through traveling. With the help of more economical traveling and modern media, people’s curiosity about things in other places can be satisfied. However, it also brings about negative things like lack of energy and air pollution. So nothing is really perfect, isn’t it?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇概括短文并談看法的寫作。簡要概括短文，以“交通的發(fā)展給我們帶來什么”這個主題，分析原因并發(fā)表自己的看法。注意觀點明確，條理清晰。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。結構上，可以先從材料給的信息入手，概括短文要點。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點說明】in turn ,bring about等詞組使文章更生動；“With the help of more economical traveling and modern media”使用with的復合結構；Then, people had bicycles, ships, cars and trains and now we have planes or even spaceships, which are much faster. which引導的非限制性定語從句使文章更有水平。文章的安排分為兩部分，第一段：簡要概括短文要點。第二段：分析原因，根據(jù)所給要點展開分析，發(fā)表自己的觀點。