Question

8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（Λ）并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
People cannot get away from advertisements which promise cheap goods and free gifts．
Last week，I have read an advertisement．Seeing the attract prices for the goods，I couldn't help
drive to the supermarket．As the advertisement say most of the things there were much cheap
than usual．In not time，I filled two baskets ten bars of soap，two very nice-looking kitchen knives，
and so on．When my husband got home and saw all the things，he said，"What do you need all these
things to？"He was right．There was already enough soap at home，but there were already two
knives in the kitchen drawer．I think I should be smart about advertisement and not be tricked by them．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述我們逃避不了廣告的誘惑，總是買一些我們用不著的物品．作者以自己為例，購買了家里已有很多的肥皂和刀具．因此，我們應當提防廣告，不要受它們欺騙．

解答 People cannot get away from advertisements which promise cheap goods and free gifts．
Last week，I have read an advertisement．Seeing the attract prices for the goods，I couldn't help
drive to the supermarket．As the advertisement say most of the things there were much cheap
than usual．In not time，I filled two baskets∧ten bars of soap，two very nice-looking kitchen knives，
and so on．When my husband got home and saw all the things，he said，"What do you need all these
things to？"He was right．There was already enough soap at home，but there were already two
knives in the kitchen drawer．I think I should be smart about advertisement and not be tricked by them．
詳解：
1．去掉have 考查動詞時態(tài)．根據時間狀語Last week，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
2．attract改為attractive 考查形容詞．prices是名詞，要用形容詞修飾．
3．drive改為driving 考查動名詞．can't help doing sth．意為"禁不住做某事"，是固定搭配．
4．say改為said 考查動詞時態(tài)．此處講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
5．cheap改為cheaper 考查形容詞比較級．根據句中than，要用形容詞比較級．
6．not改為no 考查固定搭配．in no time意為"馬上，立即"，是固定搭配．
7．加with 考查介詞．fill…with…意為"用…把…裝滿"，是固定搭配．
8．to改為for 考查介詞．for意為"以（提及物）為原因（或理由）"．
9．but改為and 考查連詞．前后兩個分句之間是并列關系而非轉折關系，用連詞and．
10．advertisement改為advertisements 考查名詞復數．advertisement是可數名詞，根據下文的them，要用復數形式．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．