Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

The earthquake affects the students of the destroying areas in many ways. How can we help them? One expert says the child will have feelings of fear, angry and feel they are not safe after the quake. They will find it hardly to focus. They will tend to cry and shout and tremble. And they might be afraid to be alone.The teenagers will find it difficult to live in a balance way. If things get worse they might not be able to focus to their studies. He also say we can do something to help the children. The first thing is that to build up trust with them, and be their friend. Then you have to give them sense of safety. Thirdly, try to satisfy their psychological needs. Be a good listener whether he or she needs to talk.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】destroying → destroyed

【2】child → children

【3】angry → anger

【4】hardly → hard

【5】balance → balanced

【6】to → on

【7】say → says

【8】去掉that

【9】a sense of safety

【10】whether → if

【解析】

【1】destroying → destroyed考查形容詞。此處修飾areas，表示被毀壞的地區(qū)，應(yīng)該用形容詞。故destroying → destroyed。

【2】child → children考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)前文的them可知此處指的是孩子們。故child → children。

【3】angry → anger考查形容詞。此處與fear表示并列，根據(jù)fear可知，此處應(yīng)該用名詞形式。故angry → anger。

【4】hardly → hard考查固定用法。find it adj 發(fā)現(xiàn)某事...，故hardly → hard。

【5】balance → balanced考查形容詞。此處修飾way，應(yīng)該用形容詞修飾。故balance → balanced。

【6】to → on考查介詞。Focus on致力于；對(duì)（某事或做某事）予以注意；故to → on。

【7】say → says考查主謂一致。此處的主語是He，為第三人稱單數(shù)形式。故say → says。

【8】去掉that考查固定用法。To do表示目的，可直接用在be動(dòng)詞后。故去掉that。

【9】a sense of safety考查冠詞。此處表示安全感，是感覺得一種。故a sense of safety。

【10】whether → if考查連詞。句意：做一個(gè)好的聽眾，如果他或她需要說話。此處是if的條件句。故whether → if。