Question

農(nóng)歷新年將至，你的班級(jí)將在學(xué)期結(jié)束之際舉行一個(gè)新年派對(duì)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文在你的博客上介紹這次派對(duì)的一些情況。你的文章應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn)：
派對(duì)的準(zhǔn)備情況 （購(gòu)買氣球、彩帶裝飾班級(jí)，準(zhǔn)備禮物）。
派對(duì)的內(nèi)容 （互換新年禮物, 表達(dá)新年祝福, 進(jìn)行表演、游戲等活動(dòng)）。
你準(zhǔn)備的禮物與你期待收到的禮物。
注意：1．可以適當(dāng)組合要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)刪減或添加信息以使文章流暢。
2．必須使用至少一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，一個(gè)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。
3．詞數(shù)100左右。段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。
參考詞匯:  balloon (氣球)，  ribbon (彩帶)，  exchange (交換)
The Lunar New Year is drawing near. At the end of this term, my class will have a party.
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Answer 1

The Lunar New Year is drawing near. At the end of this term, my class will have a party. The classroom has been decorated with colorful ribbons and balloons ahead of time. We are all very excited about the party, at which we will exchange gifts, make New Year wishes, put on performances as well as play games. It’s great fun receiving a gift from someone else and we all want to give a gift to make the receiver feel special.
I have had my gift ready. I prepared a notebook ,which is very special because there are many beautiful poems on its papers. I copied a piece of Tagore’s work on the first paper, which expresses my best wishes to the receiver. I hope I can get a cup which I have always longed for. I can hardly wait for the party and I am sure we will have a wonderful time then.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)。主要是介紹新年派對(duì)派對(duì)的一些情況。包括準(zhǔn)備情況和內(nèi)容及收送禮物情況。本文要點(diǎn)提示較多，內(nèi)容只要根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)刪減或添加信息就可以了。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意按要求必須使用至少一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，一個(gè)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，詞數(shù)100左右。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)主要特點(diǎn)是：要點(diǎn)明確，范圍具體，貼近生活，易于動(dòng)筆。此類試題中有較多的文字說(shuō)明，實(shí)際上規(guī)定了考生表述的思路，對(duì)考生的寫(xiě)作范圍作了較為明確的限定，試題中規(guī)定的要點(diǎn)一個(gè)也不能回避�？忌鷺O易受中文提綱的制約，將書(shū)面表達(dá)變成了翻譯，造成語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)匯上的單調(diào)，因此平時(shí)要多練習(xí)，活用語(yǔ)言，使文章流暢。