Question

書(shū)面表達(dá) （滿分30分）
在許多地方，家長(zhǎng)開(kāi)車(chē)接送孩子上下學(xué)已成為一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象，人們對(duì)此做法褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法。

贊成	反對(duì)
節(jié)約時(shí)間； 安全； 增加父母與孩子交流的機(jī)會(huì)。	造成交通堵塞； 增加家長(zhǎng)負(fù)擔(dān)； 使學(xué)生依賴家長(zhǎng)。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于100.
參考詞匯：
In many places, it’s common for parents to drive their children to and from school, which causes a heated debate in society.

Answer 1

In many places, it’s common for parents to drive their children to and from school, which causes a heated debate in society.
Some people think driving children to school can save their valuable time, in which way the children can get enough sleep. Besides, it is comfortable and safe for children. Also, it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children.
However, others hold different opinions. They think it may result in traffic jams. And it will lay a burden on parents. In addition, children may become too dependent on their children.
As far as I’m concerned, if it is convenient, of course, parents can drive children to school sometimes. But parents should keep it in mind that it’s better for children to be independent.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是家長(zhǎng)開(kāi)車(chē)接送孩子上下學(xué)已成為一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象，給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，就是對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的不同觀點(diǎn)，要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為贊成的觀點(diǎn)，然后是反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)，最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于正反方觀點(diǎn)作文，但是要點(diǎn)給出的比較全，只需要考生表達(dá)清楚，還有自己的觀點(diǎn)。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要適合合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。