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16．隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來(lái)越多的人擁有了自己的汽車．你班同學(xué)就此展開(kāi)討論，提出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)和看法．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，客觀介紹這兩種看法．  

學(xué)生	觀點(diǎn)
贊同者	1．方便、快捷、舒適的交通工具； 2．反映出國(guó)民生活條件提高，國(guó)家富強(qiáng)； 3．帶動(dòng)其他行業(yè)發(fā)展．
反對(duì)者	1．廢氣污染嚴(yán)重； 2．汽車過(guò)多影響交通，導(dǎo)致更多事故； 3．停車問(wèn)題日益突出．

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear editor，
    I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars．
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Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章圖表和所給提示信息寫(xiě)一封信，客觀介紹就"越來(lái)越多的人擁有了自己的汽車"這一問(wèn)題的討論形成的不同觀點(diǎn)和看法．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．開(kāi)頭-引出話題；2．贊同者觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；3．反對(duì)者觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；4．反對(duì)者觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：with the development of（解釋某事），living conditions（如下），own sth（根據(jù)），be convenient（某人認(rèn)為），means of transportation（起重要作用），give off（影響某物），pollute the environment（也），have some bad effects （進(jìn)行一些娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)），such as （例如），in one's view（就…而言）．
【高分句型一】
1．I'm writing to tell you about the discussion ①we recently had about ②whether it is good or not for families to own cars．
①此處是省略了關(guān)系代詞"that/which"的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"the discussion"，關(guān)系代詞在從句中作賓語(yǔ)省略．
②此處是由連接詞"whether…or not"引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，此處"whether"不可替換成"if"．
【高分句型二】
1．Some of us think it good to own a car．
此處是由"it"作形式賓語(yǔ)，賓補(bǔ)為"good"，真正的賓語(yǔ)為"to own a car"．
【高分句型三】
3．Besides，parking cars is another big problem．
此處是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)"parking cars"作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為"is"，表語(yǔ)為"another big problem"．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars．【高分句型一】（開(kāi)頭-引出話題）
With the development of people's living conditions，more and more people have their own cars．Some of us think it good to own a car．【高分句型二】Firstly，it's a convenient，fast and comfortable means of transportation tool．You can go to a lot of places at any time．Secondly，it shows that people are becoming richer，and the country stronger．It also makes businesses and industries develop faster．（贊同者觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)）
Others have different opinions．They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment．Too many cars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents．Besides，parking cars is another big problem．【高分句型三】（反對(duì)者觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)）
In my view，people should think carefully before they buy a car．（自己觀點(diǎn)）
Yours truly，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)的題型．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要先提出討論的話題，然后分別說(shuō)出支持方、反對(duì)方和中立方的觀點(diǎn)．在分述觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，要注意有層次地說(shuō)出支持或反對(duì)的原因等．從詞語(yǔ)上，盡可能運(yùn)用已經(jīng)學(xué)過(guò)的而且比較熟悉的詞組、短語(yǔ)，并且要力求變換各種句式，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、各種從句和固定句型等，盡量做到長(zhǎng)句和短句的交錯(cuò)使用．文中可以使用的短語(yǔ)有one the one hand，on the other hand，firstly，secondly，besides，what's more．