Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你打算明年作為交換生到美國(guó)Michigan University去學(xué)習(xí)。你從網(wǎng)上得知一家美國(guó)機(jī)構(gòu)提供寄宿家庭的信息。因此你給他們發(fā)一封電子郵件，郵件主要內(nèi)容包括：

1你對(duì)房屋類(lèi)型及位置的要求；

2，要求免費(fèi)提供一些生活設(shè)施；

3．期望月租；

4期盼盡快回復(fù)。

注意．1．詞數(shù)l00左右；

2開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam．

I'm going to study in Michigan University as an exchange student next year．

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m going to study in Michigan University as an exchange student next year. Having learned from your website that you provide accommodation information for overseas students, I’m writing to look for a suitable host family. My requirements are as follows.

First of all, I’d like to have my own single room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. Second, the flat should be in the center of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around. Third, I’d appreciate it if the host family could provide a washing machine and some other essential equipment for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals. Besides, the monthly rent should be no more than $300.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)要求是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，要求有： 1你對(duì)房屋類(lèi)型及位置的要求；2，要求免費(fèi)提

供一些生活設(shè)施； 3．期望月租；4期盼盡快回復(fù)。 注意．1．詞數(shù)l00左右；2開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，但

不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。還可以自己加入想法。

亮點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致。有效地使用了句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。