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12．If you had billions of dollars，would you donate almost all of it to charity？Well that's what Mark Zuckerberg，CEO and founder of Facebook，just said he would do．Zuckerberg and his wife Priscilla Chan promised to give 99percent of their Facebook shares to society throughout their lifetime．Right now that is about $45billion （289billion yuan），and they plan to donate the money to things like science and education．Many billionaires in the West have done similar things．Bill Gates，creator of Microsoft，made The Giving Pledge，which is where billionaires promise to gradually give away more than half of their wealth to charities．
2．China's first Charity Law was passed on March 16，2016，with lawmakers hoping it can give donors confidence that they are helping the people who really need help．The new law，which will take effect in September，makes it easier for charity groups to raise money and carry out their activities"Charitable programs are indispensable for the fight against poverty．Formulating a charity law helps nongovernmental sources work together in taking targeted measures to eliminate poverty and contribute to achieving the goal of building a moderately prosperous society，"said Li Jianguo，vice chairman of the National People's Congress （NPC） Standing Committee．
3．"Charity"，which means providing aids to needy people，is becoming a popular word in China as the country struggles to reduce the gap between rich and poor．

【寫作內容】
1．用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內容；
2．用約120個詞就慈善捐助談談你的想法，內容包括：
（1）慈善捐助對受惠人群會有哪些影響；
（2）你最想加入的慈善組織是哪一類（助學、濟貧、關愛殘疾人、…），理由是什么．
【寫作要求】
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；
3．不必寫標題．
Actively involved in the charitable work，many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise．Meanwhile，charity in China also enjoys a boom with the perfection of the relevant legal system．
Donors'unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources，making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks．In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．
Given a chance for charity，I would like to work for the children in the remote areas．Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．Our funding will cover their tuition and living costs，helping their life to get back on track．．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于讀寫任務寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容．認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系．寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采．
亮點句型一：In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．此外，受教育者也會體驗到高度的愛與關懷，學會感恩的美德，這將促使他們承擔起回報社會的責任．這是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前邊整個句子的意思．
亮點句型二：Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．他們出生在不發(fā)達的農村地區(qū)，大部分由于貧困而輟學，義務教育未完成．本句中Born in the underdeveloped country areas是過去分詞在句中作狀語； leaving their compulsory education uncompleted是現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做結果狀語．分詞在句中作狀語主要看所給的動詞與主句主語的關系，如果為被動關系則用過去分詞，如果是主動關系則用現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做狀語．

解答 Actively involved in the charitable work，many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise．Meanwhile，charity in China also enjoys a boom with the perfection of the relevant legal system．
      Donors'unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources，making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks．In addition，the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful，which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society．（亮點句型一）
     Given a chance for charity，I would like to work for the children in the remote areas．Born in the underdeveloped country areas，most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty，leaving their compulsory education uncompleted．（亮點句型二）Our funding will cover their tuition and living costs，helping their life to get back on track．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．