Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

 

 

This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a

 

 

Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop.

 

30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 great前的of 去掉

 minute→minutes

 and→but

 with→on

 when→than

 waited前加had

 other→another

 do→did

 possible→possibly

 lose→losing

【解析】

試題分析：

 Patience is of a great importance in our daily life.。importance 為抽象名詞，前面不可用冠詞，所以a 去掉。

 30 minute had passed,。minute是可數(shù)名詞， 前面又有30，所以應(yīng)用復數(shù)形式。minute改為minutes。

 30 minute had passed, and no bus came.。等了30分鐘，但是沒有汽車來。應(yīng)該是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。and改為but。

 I decided to walk with foot.。固定短語on foot，所以 with 改為 on。

 But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.。固定句型no sooner…than，所以when改為than。

 I thought if I waited for one more minute。waited 動作應(yīng)發(fā)生在動詞thought之前，所以應(yīng)該用過去完成時，waited 前面加had。

 I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes.“再30分鐘，又30分鐘”應(yīng)該是another 30 minutes，所以other改為another。

 Only then do I realize my problem. 事情發(fā)生在過去，所以 do改為did。

 Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in.修飾動詞應(yīng)該用副詞，所以possible改為possibly。

 Now whenever I am close to lose my patience. be close to 短語中to 是介詞所以lose改為losing。

考點：短文改錯，考查發(fā)現(xiàn)和改正錯誤的能力。