Question

19．你是石柱中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，你校將于5月28-31日接待來(lái)訪的美國(guó)中學(xué)生樂(lè)團(tuán)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容，代表石柱中學(xué)用英語(yǔ)給對(duì)方團(tuán)長(zhǎng)Ms．Black寫一封電子郵件，告知活動(dòng)的大致安排．

時(shí)間	活動(dòng)安排
5月28日	接機(jī)，入住人民賓館
5月29日	上午：校長(zhǎng)致辭，參觀校園、校史展覽館，交流 下午：參觀石柱博物館 晚上：觀看演出
5月30日	白天：游覽黃水景區(qū) 晚上：品嘗風(fēng)味小吃
5月31日	送機(jī)

注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：風(fēng)味小吃 local flavor snacks  校史展覽館the School Exhibition Hall
Dear Ms．Jones，
We're very glad to hear that the members of your orchestra will visit our school．
                                                           
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校將于5月28-31日接待來(lái)訪的美國(guó)中學(xué)生樂(lè)團(tuán)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容，代表石柱中學(xué)用英語(yǔ)給對(duì)方團(tuán)長(zhǎng)Ms．Black寫一封電子郵件，告知活動(dòng)的大致安排，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)：分別從時(shí)間和活動(dòng)安排來(lái)介紹 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照時(shí)間順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：On behalf of代表；in general總的來(lái)說(shuō)；pick  up去接；make a speech做演講；Besides另外；pay a visit to 參觀，拜訪；see  off 送行；have a good time 過(guò)得愉快；
On behalf of our school，I'll tell you the schedule of activities in general．（高分句型一）   
Besides，you are welcome to the School Exhibition which gives a bird view of the development of our school．（高分句型二）
In the afternoon，you're to visit Shizhu Museum，where you'll learn about the history of Shizhu．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Ms．Jones，
       We're very glad to hear that the members of your orchestra will visit our school．On behalf of our school，I'll tell you the schedule of activities in general．（高分句型一）   
       We'll pick you up at the airport on May 28^th and take you to stay at Renmin Hotel．On the morning of May 29^th，our headmaster will make a speech and then we'll show you around our schoolyard as we communicate．Besides，you are welcome to the School Exhibition which gives a bird view of the development of our school．（高分句型二）In the afternoon，you're to visit Shizhu Museum，where you'll learn about the history of Shizhu．（高分句型三）In the evening，you'll watch a performance given by both your members and our students．On May 30^th，you'll pay a visit to Huangshui scenic spots in the daytime and in the evening，you'll have a chance to taste local flavor snacks in Shizhu．On May 31^st，we'll see you off at the airport．
       We sincerely hope that you'll have a good time here!
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．