Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his hand. On the wall was a fly he took for a nail. The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they fell and broke. When the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him favor. The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had been. Before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him the accident. Looking at the spot what he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped it with all his strengths. On hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in. To her surprise, the poor old man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched(咬緊) and the palm of his hand bleed.

Answer 1

解析試題分析：文章講述一個視力不好的人在旅店把一個蒼蠅當(dāng)成釘子，把包掛上去，卻掉在地上，第二天房東打了個釘子，他還以為是蒼蠅，用手去打，結(jié)果把手打破了。
【小題1】come---came   本文的基本時態(tài)是一般過去時，這里的came是一個過去時。
【小題2】they--- it      it就是指前面的the bottle，故使用it指代上文的單數(shù)名詞。
【小題3】been去掉      動詞happen沒有被動語態(tài)的形式，故去掉been。
【小題4】加a            固定搭配do sb a favor幫某人一個人。
【小題5】exact--- exactly  用副詞exactly做狀語，來修飾整個句子。
【小題6】Before--- When  本句是指當(dāng)老人回來的時候，酒的味道讓他想起了這個事故。
【小題7】加of; 固定搭配remind sb of sth讓某人想起某事；
【小題8】what--- where   本句是一個定語從句，先行詞是the spot，后面的定語從句句中很完整就使用where引導(dǎo)。
【小題9】strengths---- strength 名詞strength力氣是一個不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題10】bleed--- bleeding 名詞the palm手掌與動詞bleed構(gòu)成主動關(guān)系，故使用現(xiàn)在分詞在句中作賓語補(bǔ)足語。
考點：考查短文改錯