Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Do you know when and where the first film was made? It was in the 1880s, more than 120 years ago, that William Friese-Green made what we now think of as a film. The fathers of modern film are thought to be the Lumiere brothers from France. The first films ever made were silent. It was not until in 1927 that the first full-length “talking film” was shown in New York.

In 1896, film was introduced to China. The first Chinese film, Conquering Jun Mountain, was made in 1905. The first film made only by Chinese was The Difficult Couple, which was made in 1913. The Chinese film industry developed quite quickly—between 1948 and 1966, more than 600 full-length films were made, most about war.

People like to enjoy themselves when they are free and so they kill time in the cinema. Besides, they can learn more about the society, like various cultures, by watching films. Finally, although films present true pictures of life, they are higher than life. Good movies usually offer people hopes and faith.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文的概要：

2. 用約120個(gè)單詞介紹一部你喜歡的電影、電影人物或演員并闡述帶給你的啟示。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句：

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

The passage conveys to us the history of the film industry together with the development of Chinese film. Three reasons why people have affection for films are touched on as well.

My favorite film is Forrest Gump. Forrest Gump is also the name of the hero, who had mental problems as well as physical problems. Finally, Forrest made a great many brilliant achievements in his life.

The deep impression that the film gives me is that Forrest just keeps running all the time. Forrest tells us such an important lesson that I rethink about the meaning of being smart and clever. In the film, I got the idea that kindness as well as simplicity is the cleverest wealth.

Forrest has made it possible that people who are considered as a fool can truly make a difference. There is no denying that ordinary people can lead a rich life by perseverance! (150 words)

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于半開放類作文。文中要求用一兩句話概括文章大意（30字），并介紹電影（人物，演員和內(nèi)容），最后要寫一下自己的啟示。所以本文應(yīng)謀篇布局分為三段。第一段概括文章大意；第二段介紹電影的有關(guān)情況；第三段寫電影的啟示錄。

由于本文講的是電影業(yè)的發(fā)展歷程和中國電影業(yè)的發(fā)展以及人們喜愛看電影的原因，所以我們可以概括為This passage tells us not only the history of the film industry but the development of Chinese film, along with three reasons why people love seeing films.

第二段介紹電影要注意：電影名字的首字母和每個(gè)單詞的首字母要大寫；我們可能會(huì)用到的詞或短語有character，actor, actress content(內(nèi)容)，介紹時(shí)我們很容易地就會(huì)用到who/that/which引導(dǎo)的定語從句如：Li Lianjie, who is a leading actor in this film, acts as an hero.等；介紹電影內(nèi)容時(shí)可以加上一些表示時(shí)間的連詞或短語，如：first of all, to begin with, next, meanwhile(與此同時(shí)), in the end, finally等，用幾句話把電影內(nèi)容敘述完整。第三段寫電影的啟示，我們可以用from this film, I know that ...; the film encourage me to ...; the film makes me believe the old saying “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”等等。接著，用這些關(guān)鍵詞或詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。最后，連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連接，進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡。書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，文章詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在文中使用了較多的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。如使用it做形式賓語代替句子并且還包含有一個(gè)定語從句的Forrest has made it possible that people who are considered as a fool can truly make a difference. 再如：使用同位語從句的There is no denying that ordinary people can lead a rich life by perseverance!另外who had mental problems as well as physical problems這個(gè)非限制性定語從句使文章很生動(dòng)靈活。從文章的謀篇布局上看：文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

亮點(diǎn)詞匯和短語：convey傳達(dá)，傳遞；affection for對(duì)…的喜愛；mental problems as well as physical problems身心問題；make a great many brilliant achievements取得卓越的成績；perseverance不屈不撓；堅(jiān)持