Question

12．假定你是李華．你收到了美國朋友彼得寄來的最新英文小說．請給他回信，要點如下：
1．小說收到；
2．回贈禮物；
3．禮物意義；
4．邀請來華．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感謝禮物）
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回贈禮物以及禮物意義）
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀請來華）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 解析
這是一篇關于禮物的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一感謝禮物；二回贈禮物以及禮物意義；三邀請來華．
高分句型：
1．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．句子里as引導定語從句，代指先行詞a lovely gift，和such呼應．
感謝你這份可愛的禮物，這一直是我期盼的．
2．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere句子里which引導非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞Paper cutting．
剪紙是中國文化傳承的獨特形式之一，它經(jīng)常用于裝飾歡樂氣氛的．

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感謝禮物）
      I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回贈禮物以及禮物意義）
      Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀請來華）
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．