Question

短文改錯(cuò)，假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.
文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(_^)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:
每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on.

Answer 1

【小題1】little---less
【小題2】toy—toys
【小題3】did—went或者did 后加go
【小題4】it—them
【小題5】在parents前加my parents
【小題6】which---what
【小題7】tear---tore
【小題8】to---for
【小題9】must—could/might
【小題10】去掉last前的to

解析【小題1】little---less 考查副詞 句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑釁性。此處less修飾形容詞。
【小題2】toy—toys 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)形式 根據(jù)each of 可知，應(yīng)該是我的玩具中的每一個(gè)，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式toys
【小題3】did—went或者did 后加go 考查固定短語(yǔ)  go wrong意為：出錯(cuò)。
【小題4】it—them      考查代詞  此處前文指toys，所以后用them
【小題5】在parents前加my parents 考查代詞 英語(yǔ)中需前后一致，my我的父母；
【小題6】which---what   考查名詞性從句的連接詞 此處what作賓語(yǔ)從句的主語(yǔ)，句意：看所發(fā)生是一切。
【小題7】tear---tore     考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài) 通過(guò)觀察整個(gè)文章的時(shí)態(tài)以及my fifth birthday可知，此處用一般過(guò)去時(shí)
【小題8】to---for       考查介詞 句意：不再給你買玩具了。Toys for sb意為：給某人的玩具
【小題9】must—could/might 考查情態(tài)動(dòng)詞 句意：擁有更多的耐心，我就能使玩具使用的更久。
【小題10】去掉last前的to考查不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ) make sb/sth do，此處make作“使”解，其后接不帶to的不定式作賓補(bǔ)
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)。