Question

【題目】最近一位教師的十字辭職信引起了人們的熱議："The world is so big. I wanna have a look.（世界這么大，我想去看看）"。就此請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇文章談?wù)劼糜蔚暮锰帯?/span>

【寫(xiě)作要求】 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the improvement of our living conditions, more and more people prefer to travel . Just as an old saying goes, “The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page” , which means travelling can broaden our horizons. Besides, we may meet those who have the same interest with us and develop a lifelong friendship while travelling. What’s more, we can learn much knowledge through traveling, thus enriching our experiences. Finally, travel is the best way of pastime, through which we can enjoy eating various food , seeing beautiful scenery and relax ourselves.

【解析】本文是一篇提綱作文。成文時(shí)要注意：1. 要點(diǎn)要全面；2. 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；3.介紹當(dāng)前的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4.注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和過(guò)渡句，以使行文連貫，順暢；5.盡量使用非謂語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)，介詞短語(yǔ)以及定語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句等包含信息量大的長(zhǎng)句，以增加文章亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言通順，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。使用的句型有定語(yǔ)從句who have the same interest with us and develop a lifelong friendship while travelling，介詞短語(yǔ)With the improvement of our living conditions，和俗語(yǔ)”The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page 等。