Question

寫作（滿分30分）

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，不久前某英語(yǔ)雜志社舉辦“ 建設(shè)節(jié)約型校園 ”征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文：

1. 學(xué)校里浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象，如水、電與餐廳食物等；

2. 浪費(fèi)造成的危害；

3. 你的建議與措施。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Building up a Saving Campus

Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice with the improvement of people’s living standard, how much is wasted on campus? For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, waste running water after washing dishes. In the dining hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.

The habit of being wasteful has a bad effect on our character. We have to pay for those things wasted, and this adds to our expense. What is worse, we are wasting the earth’s resource. So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.

How to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it is everybody’s duty to save energy and resources. We must start with ourselves and from now! Then our society will go on developing and our life will be better.

【解析】

試題分析：考生應(yīng)不難理解寫作要求和寫作目的，短文的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)要寫好，要適時(shí)地引導(dǎo)要點(diǎn)上去�？忌�首先要仔細(xì)審題，包括以下幾個(gè)方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)（2）語(yǔ)氣（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，這是半開(kāi)放性作文，要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒?jí)句式和高級(jí)詞匯，以提高書面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：作文要層次清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，表達(dá)流暢，切合作文要求，語(yǔ)氣誠(chéng)懇。文中使用一些極佳的詞語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色，使用高級(jí)詞匯及句型。