Question

假如你是李曉華，住在太原，你的加拿大筆友Bob來(lái)信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)太原的情況。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信�；匦彭毎�括以下內(nèi)容。

自然情況	位于汾河邊，氣候宜人，適合居住
成就	經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速， 新建了不少工廠，住房，道路等
存在問(wèn)題	水污染，空氣污染；交通擁擠
對(duì)太原發(fā)展的看法	（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：經(jīng)濟(jì) economy

Answer 1

Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown, Taiyuan.
The city stands on the bank of the Fenhe River. it is a good place for people to live in as the climate here is neither too hot nor too cold.. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.
In my opinion, Tiayuan should develop its economy scientifially. I would also think that the groth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.
Yours,
Xiaohua

試題分析：本文是一篇書(shū)信體作文。作文的主旨是：介紹家鄉(xiāng)太原的情況。主要包括兩大方面的內(nèi)容：自然情況，成就，存在問(wèn)題及對(duì)太原發(fā)展的看法。其中大部分要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)提示出來(lái)了，而且要點(diǎn)比較齊。只要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢就行了。但在“對(duì)太原發(fā)展的看法”方面，內(nèi)容是由考生自己擬定，故屬于半開(kāi)放類作文�？忌�可以自由發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)出兩三個(gè)要點(diǎn)就可以了。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意回信作文首先要簡(jiǎn)短的提一下寫(xiě)信人的問(wèn)題，用一個(gè)承接的句子，如本文中It’s very kind of you to write to me ...Now I’d like to tell you something about還可以記住一個(gè)通用的開(kāi)頭格式：Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to hear from you.(謝謝你的來(lái)信，收到你的信我非常高興)這是一個(gè)比較通用的回信開(kāi)頭。其他的內(nèi)容要依據(jù)來(lái)信內(nèi)容或者要向?qū)Ψ疥愂龅膬?nèi)容而定。