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健康之重要人盡皆知。許多青少年不注重健康問題，假期尤甚。長時(shí)間看電視，通宵上網(wǎng)聊天、玩游戲。導(dǎo)致的危害如：影響視力，身體虛弱，缺乏人際交往。 簡述你的看法，提出你的建議。
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Have a healthy lifestyle
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Answer 1

Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.
However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.
In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer. Go out to take some exercises, play some sports and visit some and have a healthy lifestyle.

試題分析：本文是一篇給出漢語提示的書面表達(dá)。文章給出的提示較為詳細(xì)，學(xué)生只要按照漢語提示連句成文即可。成文要注意：1.內(nèi)容要齊全；健康之重要人盡皆知。許多青少年不注重健康問題，假期尤甚。長時(shí)間看電視，通宵上網(wǎng)聊天、玩游戲。導(dǎo)致的危害如：影響視力，身體虛弱，缺乏人際交往。 簡述你的看法，提出你的建議。2.人稱：第三人稱；3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語和句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】使用了高級(jí)句型倒裝句：Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.使用了定語從句：As we all know,。。。。 which is bad for their health. 。。。which may have a bad effect on their mental health.
使用了短語：pay any attention to；spend too much time doing sth；Go out to do sth；連詞和插入語：However, First, Besides, In my opinion等。