Question

最近，你班同學(xué)就“父母是不是最好的老師”這一話題展開討論，有些人認(rèn)為父母是最好的老師，有些人認(rèn)為也不盡然。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，介紹討論結(jié)果以及你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。

觀點(diǎn) 原因	同意	不完全同意
1	教會(huì)如何生活	過(guò)分溺愛
2	指出缺點(diǎn)，指明方向	強(qiáng)加興趣、價(jià)值觀
3	教會(huì)富有愛心	希望值過(guò)高

要求：1、根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文通順連貫。
2、詞數(shù)：120詞左右。3、開頭已給出，不計(jì)人單詞總數(shù)。
Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers . Some students                                                                   

Answer 1

Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers . Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life . What’s more, parents’ love helps to teach them how to love others, So parents are their most important teachers .
However, not all of us hold the views, Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. More-over , their parents some times expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.
In my opinion , parents are our important teachers , But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap .

解析試題分析：本文屬于考生比較熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類議論文，也就是關(guān)于一個(gè)話題的兩種不同的態(tài)度，支持的或者反對(duì)的。本文的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出來(lái)了，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)都連接起來(lái)，使之成為一個(gè)整體。如for one hand, for anther, what’s more等，這些連接詞可以讓文章更為流暢。也要使用一些高級(jí)的句型如定語(yǔ)從句，倒裝句等讓文章富有變化，不要那么死板。在選詞的時(shí)候，要選擇4,5個(gè)高級(jí)的詞匯或者短語(yǔ)，可以提升文章的層次。
考點(diǎn)：考查正反觀點(diǎn)類議論文的寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文仍然屬于提綱類作文，也屬于議論文。本類文章有模板可套用，關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)的完備，不能遺漏。另外文章中要有亮點(diǎn)，如本文的連接詞的使用就很合理。。