Question

19．假定你是李華，你校英語報社開辟了"Reader's Voice"專欄，邀請讀者針對一些熱點問題發(fā)表自己的看法．請你以"Should high school students study abroad during the  holidays？"為題，寫一篇英語短文投稿．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．分析高中生出國留學的利弊；
2．闡述你對此現(xiàn)象的看法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
In recent years more and more high school students study abroad during the holidays．
Studying abroad is beneficial to them．First of all，it will open their mind and enrich their experience．In addition，①it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends，②which can improve their communication skills（高分句型一）．However，it will take parents a lot of money to send their children abroad．And some students prefer traveling to learning．So it is a waste of money and absolutely not worthwhile．
Personally，studying abroad can help students broaden their horizons and learn to be independent（高分句型二）．But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially（高分句型三）．．

Answer 1

分析 本文為議論文寫作．人稱以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．寫作要點為：1．分析高中生出國游學的利弊；2．闡述你對此現(xiàn)象的看法．
重要詞匯：study abroad （出國留學）；be beneficial to（有益于）；in addition（另外，此外）；communication skills（交際能力，溝通能力）；prefer A to B（A與B相比，更喜歡A）；broaden one's horizon（開闊某人的視野）； support（支持）
高分句型：
1．In addition，it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends，which can improve their communication skills． 
①it作形式主語，真正的主語為后面的不定式短語to learn new culture and make new friends；
②which引導一個非限制性定語從句，關系代詞which指代前一句中提到的事情．
2．Personally，studying abroad can help students broaden their horizons and learn to be independent．非謂語動詞studying abroad 在句中作主語． 
3．But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially． 這句中用到了句式結構"it+be+（for sb）+to do sth"，其中it是形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式短語．

解答 In recent years more and more high school students study abroad during the holidays． 
     Studying abroad is beneficial to them．First of all，it will open their mind and enrich their experience．In addition，①it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends，②which can improve their communication skills（高分句型一）．However，it will take parents a lot of money to send their children abroad．And some students prefer traveling to learning．So it is a waste of money and absolutely not worthwhile．
      Personally，studying abroad can help students broaden their horizons and learn to be independent（高分句型二）．But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially（高分句型三）．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．